Feedback on first showing

To gain some feedback on our music video from our peers, we showed our music video to everyone and they gave us ideas on what to work on and what was good about the music video. The main criticism was the pace of the music video as there were many different shots which could be seen as being too slow for what could be seen as a convention of a music video. To be able to consolidate for this criticism, we have tried to use different conventions which may be seen in a music video, such as using jump cuts, this was an idea which could be used as it could be seen as a homage to Alfred Htichcock by using that technique in many thriller/horror films like Psycho.